Summary: This handout defines and shows examples of grammar, usage, and style errors commonly seen in undergraduate writing in the sciences. During class, students might be asked to revise each example.
| Name of error | What it means | Example of error |
| Anthropomorphism | Giving human qualities to nonhumans | “Antibodies want to bind specifically to the antigens they recognize.” |
| Comma splice | Linking independent clauses with a comma (without a coordinating conjunction such as and, but, or, yet) | “The test was performed using bovine SSA, however human SSA has also been used successfully.” |
| Expletive at beginning of a sentence | Starting with “there is” or “it is” | “There are many studies focusing on autoantibodies in SLE.” |
| Incorrect word | Affect (verb) vs. effect (noun); That (restricts) vs. which (adds additional information) | “Competing antigen has a great affect on the binding.”“The antibodies to SSA, which were stored at room temperature, failed to react with the sera.” [Intended meaning: only those stored at RT failed to react.] |
| Non-parallel construction | Failure to use grammatically equal words, phrases, or clauses | “The physician’s goals include managing the pain and better prediction of flares.” |
| Nominalization (wordiness) | Using noun form of a verb unnecessarily | “Purified SSA exhibited competition with the sera for binding.” |
| Redundant categories (wordiness) | Attaching a category to a word that implies its category | “The sample was yellow in color.” |
| Redundant pairs (wordiness) | Using redundant words when one word is sufficient | “Antibody was added to each individual vial.” |
| Unnecessary that, to, which clauses | “Methods that are quantitative are preferred.” | |
| Weak pronoun reference | Use of it, this, that, these, those, they, and which without clear reference to a noun | “Calf thymus is a rich source of SSA, SSB, and other antigens. It is homogenized in buffer to extract proteins.” |