Summary: Adapted from Burnett, RE (1997) Technical Communication, 4th ed. Wadsworth: Washington, D.C
| Cardinal | Ordinal |
| I washed the plate three times. | The third plate grew cells. |
| I washed the plate 12 times. | The 12th plate grew cells. |
| The 3rd and 12th plates grew cells. |
Original: 12 patients participated in the study.
Revised: Twelve patients participated in the study.
Original: 133 patients were interviewed.
Revised: We interviewed 133 patients.
Original: 2-mercaptoethanol was the mutagen in our experiment.
Revised: The mutagen in our experiment was 2-mercaptoethanol.
| 20o C | 17 in | 3.2 L |
| 100 microliters | 1,200 sq ft | 220 volts |
A rejection rate of 7% is too high.
The average reading on the machine was 2.54.
Ratio of 0.93 (not .93)
P < .07 (not 0.07, although this may be accepted in some disciplines)
| Age 38 | 18 months old |
| 2-year-old | men in their 70s |