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Writing a descriptive paragraph or poem

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ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE

Grade 8

WHO’S WHO . . . IN THE ZOO?

Module 1

TO WRITE A DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH / POEM

THIS IS A THINKING GAME!

Who’s who ..... in the zoo?

Can you work out the names of the animals in the four rhyming riddles below?

They are all animals that can be seen in most zoos. Fill in each space.

Tip: The answer to each riddle is given BUT the letters are not in the right order.

THE GREAT PRETENDER

I am a creature that everyone fears: Don’t trust my smile and don’t trust my tears.To think I’m asleep is a fatal mistake. This hungry - - - - - - - - - is wide awake!

Answer: clodeoric - MJB

SCAVENGER

From shadows he watches the lions feast;hears the crunching of bone as they tear at a beast. When the lions have gone, he dines all aloneon dry clotted blood and splinters of bone.Friendless, detested, welcomed by noneHe’s the laughing - - - - - whom all creatures shun.

Answer: heany - MJB

MR WONDERFUL

I am the most beautiful cat of allI am a - - - - - from Bengal.

Answer: grite - MJB

ZOO FAVOURITE

I am the clown the kids love to see.I swing along from tree to tree.My arms are so long they reach to my knee I’m the friendliest, funniest young - - - - - - - - - -

Answer: pincehmaze - MJB

Activity 1:

To write a descriptive paragraph/poem

[LO 4.4.1, 3.1.1]

  1. Write a descriptive paragraph/poem (± 70 words) of an animal in a specific setting.

Choose imaginative and vivid ADJECTIVES to describe what you see.

Use powerful VERBS to describe movement and sound.

Start with a striking sentence.

Possible template to use:

  • Striking first line
  • Some adjectives to use
  • Some verbs to use
  • Rough draft(s)
  • Edited version

2. Now find a poem about an animal that appeals to you and come and read it to the class.

It is important that you manage to convey what the poet is trying to say. Remember: It is the message of the poem that is important – so you need not feel shy or embarrassed.

ACTIVITY 2:

LISTENING AND RESPONDING

[LO 5.2.1]

zoo / zu:/ n. a zoological garden. [abbr.]

zoologist / n. a scientist who studies animals

zoology n. the scientific study of animals

Do you really know what a zoo is? Your teacher will read you a passage. You must listen closely so that you can answer the questions which follow. You may take notes. Your answers must be based on the text. You will probably be amazed to see how much you have learnt by just listening! .

How well did you listen? Answer the following questions and find out!

Write your answers down in the space provided. Do not write while your teacher is reading!

LISTENING ASSESSMENT

Table 1
Zoo” is an abbreviation. What was a zoo originally called? …………..
For whom were zoos originally intended?  
What word is used which means “kings and queens”?  
What animal, mentioned in the passage, lives only in Australia?  
What animal is very inquisitive?  
What animal has a long memory?  
Are gorillas naturally aggressive, shy or friendly?  
Table 2
HOW WELL DID YOU LISTEN?If you want to know how well you did, compare the number of correct answers you had, against the CODE below.
 
4 = Has done very well
3 = Satisfactory performance
2 = Not satisfactory – needs help
1 = Below expectations

The comments below are aimed at self-assessment. Read the COMMENTS, decide which one applies to YOU. Read the corresponding ADVICE and follow it to improve your listening skills!

Table 3
COMMENT ADVICE
1. I understood the facts and remembered them. Well done! Keep reading and noting facts as you read
2. I could not listen and take in the facts at the same time. Read items from the newspaper daily. Then ask yourself questions.
3. I listened and understood, but I could not remember answers Try to concentrate on facts. Jot down key-words which will jog your memory.
4. I did not understand many of the words in both the passage and the questions You must read, read, read! You need to build up your vocabulary actively. Keep a personalised mini-dictionary!

ACTIVITY 3:

“IN MY OPINION . . . ”

[LO 4.6.1]

This activity will teach you how to express your opinion effectively.

Good communication is a combination of skills. These are skills which can be learnt. The more you practise them, the more they will improve.

Think about an issue.

Decide what your point of view is.

Find the facts - base your opinion on facts.

Express your opinion clearly and correctly.

Of course people have different opinions and everyone is entitled to an opinion!Just remember that a person’s point of view is influenced by many things. Specific cultures, education and knowledge are a few of the things that cause people to see things differently. Bear this in mind when you differ and always try to understand the way other people think even though you may disagree.

Say “YES!”

agree: to say you have the same opinion

confirm: to back up what has been said

approve: to support what has been said

Say what you mean;mean what you say!”

Say “NO!”

disagree: to have a different opinion

deny: to say you do not accept what has been said

disapprove: to say you dislike what has been said

WHAT you say is important, but HOWyou say it ismore important

When you agree, disagree, confirm, deny, approve or disapprove, you are saying Yes or No. Study the dictionary definitions (above), to understand them.

Now, choose a partner and practisethe art of saying “Yes” or “No” correctly.

Read the following example. It shows how two people can have differing opinions.

Perhaps add some ideas?

Important reminder and CHECKLIST: When writing a play-form dialogue:

Table 4
Do not use inverted commas. …………………
Leave a line open between speakers.  
Allow the words to create your characters.  
Print the name of each speaker clearly against the left margin.  
Put a colon after each speaker’s name.  
Give stage instructions (if any) in brackets  
Use the correct tense: Present or Present Continuous Tense.  
Use correct spelling and other language use.  
Use correct punctuation  
Use neat handwriting  

DOGS

Lee: I really love dogs! They are SO loyal!

Chris: I hate them! They stink!

Lee: That might be true of SOME dogs but I like them because they are wonderful pets.

Chris: Yet I hate them because they have fleas, they chase my bike and bark all night.

Lee: That is because you always tease them.

Chris: I never tease dogs!

Lee: Yes, you do!

Chris: I DO NOT!!!

Build YOUR OWN “Yes” / “No” conversations to practise the skill of expressing the following correctly, effectively, yet politely:

Table 5
YES NO
  • how to agree with someone
how to disagree with someone
  • how to confirm your opinion
how to deny something
  • how to approve of an opinion
how to disapprove of an opinion.

Read the Instructions carefully:

1. Choose a partner.

2. The two of you must prepare THREE dialogues together.

3. You must choose one topicfrom each group of topics below:

Table 6
Agree / disagree on –  
Homework is unnecessary  
The best team sport of all is . . .  
Cats are better pets than dogs.  
  Confirm/deny -
  “I hear you won a million rand!”
  “Saturday’s party has been cancelled?”
  “Hey! That’s my T-shirt you are wearing!”
  Approve / disapprove
  Body-piercing and tattoos
  Magic
  Video games

4. Speaker 1 must make a comment.

5. Speaker 2 must respond.

6. Both speakers must speak at least THREE times

7. Do rough planning of your spoken dialogue in the space provided.

8. Add stage instructions where necessary.

9. Choose the best dialogue, practise it and perform it for the class.

Now select the BEST dialogue, practise it and act it out before the class.

Assessment

Table 7
LO 3
Reading and ViewingThe learner will be able to read and view for information and enjoyment, and respond critically to the aesthetic, cultural and emotional values in texts.
We know this when the learner:
3.1 reads a text (fiction or non-fiction):3.1.1 identifies purpose, audience and context.
LO 4
WritingThe learner will be able to write different kinds of factual and imaginative texts for a wide range of purposes.
We know this when the learner:
4.4 writes creatively:4.4.1 shows development in the ability to write stories, poems and play-scripts (e.g. by using figurative language);
4.6 treats writing as a process: 4.6.1 drafts, reads and discusses own writing critically;
LO 5
Thinking and ReasoningThe learner will be able to use language to think and reason, as well as to access, process and use information for learning.
We know this when the learner:
5.2 uses language for thinking: 5.2.1 asks and answers more complex questions (e.g. ‘When this is changed, then what else would change?’).

Memorandum

Activity 1

Answers:

THE GREAT PRETENDER: crocodile SCAVENGER: hyena ZOO FAVOURITE: chimpanzee MR WONDERFUL: tiger

Activity 2

LISTENING ASSESSMENT

Read the questions TWICE, slowly and clearly.

Table 8
“Zoo” is an abbreviation. What was a “zoo” originally called? a zoological garden
For whom were zoos originally intended? royalty and rich
What word is used which means “of kings and queens”? royalty
What animal, mentioned in the passage, lives only in Australia? kangaroo
What animal is very inquisitive? hippo
What animal has a long memory? elephant
Are gorillas naturally A aggressive B shy C friendly? shy

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